Classical Argument Outline

1.The Introduction :

I will begin my paper with familiar sentence : Computers are parts of human beings' life and their power are getting higher and higher. Thinking about, human use computer in various way. They use them to buy books, clothes, foods, or to watch news, TV shows, movies, cartoon, lectures. In turn, I will move reader's attention mentioning 'cyber problems on the internet' and will mention that recently the revival of network real-name system on the cyber place has appeared. Then I will put my thesis statement : However, the network real name system should not be revived.


2. The Narration :

I will summarize relevant materials on my research and then I will mention Korean's thinking about the network real name system. Then, I will mention brief history of the network real-name system and some negative aspects according to a study <What’s in a name? Real name policies and social networks by Lilian Edwards and Derek McAuley> referring to Iranian "Twitter Revolution" in 2009.


3. The Confirmation :

I will start my confirmation by mentioning huge personal information leakage after exerting this system in 2009 arguing that this system can lead to serious personal information leakage easily. Then I will mention opinions of member of National Assembly. Subsequently, I will show the network real-name system's inefficiency by referring to a statistic about malicious comments. Lastly, I will examine the violation(freedom of expression) of the network real-name system on constitution. I will refer to a study that has been done by Hanyang university.

4. The Refutation and Concession

I will start this paragraph by conceding that the network real-name system play a role in protecting cyber place to some extent. Then I will use a research paper <The Influence of Network Real-name System on the Management of Internet Public Opinion by Son Guangxing and Yang Pingfang that dealt with positive aspects about the network real-name system. And I will use Google chairman's mention.



5. The Summation

I will close this paragraph with my previous points and then I will reconsider about the freedom of political expression and Iranian's political revolution. Then I will restate my thesis statement again at the end of this paragraph.